Dan Fogelberg Musical
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2/20/2011

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We arrived back in LA on February 20th.  We could have flown all the way home from Nashville without an airplane, that’s how high off the ground we were!

The following day, Kate and I went right to work on the Book for Part of the Plan.  We knew we had a story (the one we pitched to Jean, Norbert and Sheryl), but we needed to make certain it would translate into a script for a stage musical.  The characters needed to be fully realized, the plot points had to make sense, and we wanted to create a solid balance between drama and humor, action and romance.  We began to write our script, and rewrite, and rewrite.  

While this is the first project Kate and I have collaborated on, we discovered we had very similar sensibilities.  One would start to explain an idea, and the other would jump in to finish the thought.  When we’d get simultaneous goose bumps, it was time to put pen to paper.  We knew that Part of the Plan would follow parallel stories – that of the privileged but rebellious Rebecca, who gets pregnant at 16, and Sean, the boy she’s forced to give up for adoption.  And we discovered that the best musicals start out with a bang, so we decided to bring up the curtain on a
country club dance in 1950, a la Mad Men, with the entire chorus as wealthy elitists performing “Power of Gold.”  When we needed a big Act I finish, “A Voice for Peace” transformed into a Vietnam-era anthem (a troop carrier may
just be the icing on the cake for this scene, if the budget allows ;-).

Those times when Kate and I would disagree, we were always respectful, even while our voices would get louder and we passionately swore that my way (or hers) was PERFECT!  In fact, we’re still arguing over whether Sean should accompany himself on guitar when he sings “Leader of the Band” at a critical, dramatic turning point, or whether he should simply sing it standing in a spotlight.  Anyone wanna break a stalemate?

It had been a long time since I’d written with a partner in the same room, but Kate and I came up with a system that worked beautifully.  On any given day, I would take the scenes from one storyline, and Kate would write scenes from the other.  When we’d paste them together at the end of the day, we were always surprised how seamlessly they blended, as if we’d written them together. 

We continued to immerse ourselves in Dan’s music, gaining a greater and deeper respect for the man’s talent. 
While it’s impossible to do justice to his entire catalog, we selected (and reselected) the songs that helped us envision the story we wanted to tell, a process that’s still ongoing.  Just the other day, we added “Ever On,” partly inspired by the feedback we’ve been getting from all of you.  I’m certain any Dan Fan will have opinions about where we get it right, and where we miss the boat, but ultimately, we have to follow our instincts.  The echo of Jean’s words – to always protect the integrity of Dan’s work – is our guiding force.  So we continue to remain true to our vision, our story, and our passion to bring Dan’s music to a generation who may not know his work, to those who may have forgotten his artistry, and to the die-hard fans who yearn to hear his music in all forms.

It was going to take time for all the legal and contractual details to be worked out, which gave us the time we needed to think, create, and write!  Throwing ourselves into our work was heaven.  We could have kept rewriting the book, but the day of reckoning was coming.  We had to get out from our safe little cave of an office and actually hear the words spoken.  By real actors!  Sitting around a table in Kate’s living room.  That, my friends, was terrifying.

- Karen Harris
 
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21 Comments
Kate Atkinson
6/24/2013 08:34:59 am

For those of you who will actually read the first page of the script, the sections in all CAPITAL LETTERS mark the singing, i.e. the music and lyrics of Dan Fogelberg... "Balance the cost of the soul you lost..." God, than man was a poet!

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char
6/24/2013 08:58:01 am

Yes, the poet who penned a story deep within my soul

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Joan
6/24/2013 03:48:05 pm

I think Dan considered himself more of a lyrist than a poet. But yes his words are anchored deep within my soul. Gone are the pathways the child followed home, gone like the sand and the foam.

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Kate & Karen
7/2/2013 01:10:21 pm

Amen!

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Carol
6/27/2013 07:18:02 pm

"And here is a sunrise to set on your sill,
Ghosts of the dawn moving near,
They pass throught your sorrow and leave you quite still,
Sitting among souvenirs"

Somehow I see this musical coinciding with the spirit of Dan's words as he had intended.

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Kate & Karen
7/2/2013 01:09:33 pm

Carol, what a beautiful concept... yours is a perfect description of what we're striving for...

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Becky Norris
7/3/2013 10:11:50 pm

I am really looking forward to the finished product. I've been following him for decades. I remember a friend of mine who used to play for the Exiles told me once that he had been told to watch out for a young man named Dan Fogelberg because he was such a great talent. I love his lyrics and they will carry his music to so many generations to come. He was a great lyricist. The depth he gave to his words was amazing, and so beautifully penned.

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Dominique O:Carrigan link
7/3/2013 10:26:57 pm

Everything about Dan drew me in.....first, his sound, both voice and music...then I was entranced with the lyrics...and Dan's presence in his performances!!! I sadly didn't get to a live performance as I live in Australia but I've seen many videos in the last 20 years..... and I'll never forget that first feeling, that he was singing to me!!

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Jana Fulda Russell
7/3/2013 10:27:00 pm

Stars fall every time a lover has to face the truth...

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Holly Zinner
7/4/2013 07:49:25 am

I heard Dan play that song at the Red Herring Folk Festival at the U of Illinois. He had just finished writing it...

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Nick Marrone
7/3/2013 10:39:21 pm

This is awesome. Huge Dan Fan!

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Darlene link
7/3/2013 11:23:10 pm

I'm glad to see that you decided to use the song Ever On in your musical.....I've even told my children that I would like that song (and To The Morning) played at my memorial service someday.

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Ed & Sue Cope
7/3/2013 11:25:59 pm

His lyrics and music still and always will remain dear to our hearts. He is sadly missed but his music remains as our lasting memories. Awesome reading. We will always remain his fans.

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Scott Hunt
7/3/2013 11:32:17 pm

Re: the question about guitar/no guitar on Leader of the Band, it seems to me it comes down to the voice and the scene. As a guitar player, I would typically go with the guitar. And as a guitar player I would end up focusing on the guitar. If the actor's voice is strong enough, it seems like that is telling the story, unless guitar plays a more prominent role for the character?

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Randi Marten
7/4/2013 12:52:04 am

the woman's like an ivy on a pole; she wraps her twisted love around my soul....his lyrics have always just killed me!

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Tim Ryland
7/4/2013 07:23:09 am

One of the greatest lyrics/songs ever. I've been a monstrous Dan fan since I heard "Home Free" before it was released (through a connection at Epic Records), and I know it's probably blasphemy to say this, but Dan's greatest songs were his early ones. After "The Innocent Age" his songwriting declined. Not that there weren't still brilliant moments,..

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Mike Prather link
7/4/2013 01:33:41 am

Why not have Sean sing and have another person to the side in silhouette playing the guitar?

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Phyllis Viola
7/4/2013 02:36:58 am

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Tim Ryland
7/4/2013 06:49:26 am

Standing in a spotlight.

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Pamela Powers January link
7/4/2013 08:08:27 am

Greetings Kate and Karen! Wanted to say hello and compliment you both on this wonderful tribute to the artistry of Dan Fogelberg! I myself am Peoria born and both my parents attended Woodruff High School. My mother especially, revered Lawrence Fogelberg, the beloved Leader of the Band. My mother's sister was a drum majorette for the band and my mother's sister-in-law (while watching band practice) often remembered seeing Dan, on the field running around like a dervish - much to his father's chagrin. The students in the band referred to young Dan as "Danny the wild man". I never met Dan Fogelberg myself but have always felt close to him in spirit as a result of shared connections. I began following his music in 1977 when I entered college and have remained a loyal and devoted fan ever on. It is thrilling to me that this musical drama is being realized and I compliment you for this bold undertaking! Dan Fogelberg was a rare and singular talent whose body of work is authentic and unique! I still get the chills when I hear his magic voice, expressive guitar and listen to the very comforting wisdom in his words. He understood the human condition which is why his music continues to provoke thought and elicit very visceral responses from so many of us! Thank you for sharing your work as it progresses. It invites all of us Dan fans the opportunity to feel closer to him once more and also share together our appreciation of his extraordinary talent. On a personal note I would like to add that my all time favorite Fogelberg masterpiece is "Scarecrow's Dream". Brings tears to my eyes every time. God Bless!

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David Morehead
7/4/2013 01:35:48 pm

Listen to the song my soul sings to you as my words fail to speak. Best wishes for the success of your project !

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